eithne
TV Novice
Drama Queen!
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Post by eithne on Aug 4, 2005 19:37:16 GMT
This is fan fiction with a difference!!!
Just add a new paragraph every time. I really want to try and keep this story normal, with no crazy storylines though so please don't ruin it.
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eithne
TV Novice
Drama Queen!
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Post by eithne on Aug 4, 2005 19:53:20 GMT
The birds were singing happily, and the sun was shining brightly down on Albert Sqaure as a black cab entered the Sqaure one beautfiful day. The lady looked out of the window as she passed through the Square. This was her first time there, but she'd heard so much about it before. The cab finally came to a halt outside the Queen Vic, where a very special event was taking place inside. A tall, dark haired woman stepped out - her name Dani Watts (long lost daughter of Den).
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lozzi
TV Repairer
Mrs Ben Freeman
Frankie Lampard is class!
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Post by lozzi on Aug 6, 2005 10:04:39 GMT
She stared up at the Vic, took a deep breath and stepped inside. The whole pub was alive and by the looks of things, partying. They were all celebrating Dot and Jim's wedding anniversary. Dani went over to tha bar. chrissie said 'Yes love, what can I get you?' Dani, knowing that she was looking at her 'step-mum', replied 'My father. I want my dad, Den. You see, i'm his daughter Dani. Is he here?'....
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eithne
TV Novice
Drama Queen!
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Post by eithne on Aug 7, 2005 23:27:52 GMT
Chrissie let the glass she was holding fall to the ground. She was silent, not knowing how to take this in. Den had yet another love child? What if she brings out the truth? I can't let her...
A few people, including Sharon, looked over to see why Chrissie had dropped the glass. Sharon left Jim and Dot and walked over to where Dani stood at the bar. "Chrissie, is everything okay?" Chrissie took a moment to respond, before smiling up at Sharon. "Yes, it's fine."
Sharon looked at Dani for a moment, before going back to Jim and Dot. Chrissie told Dani to follow her into the back. When they got inside the door, Chrissie turned around. "Right, how much money do you want to get out of my step children's lives?"
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Jamie
Drama Devotee
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Post by Jamie on Oct 16, 2005 17:44:39 GMT
"Money? What are you, some kind of pyschopath? I want to see my father", replied Dani anxiously "Where is he?" "He isn't here. He hasn't been here for months. He's dead" A collision of shock and devestation rocks Dani's face as the truth of her father's whereabouts sinks in. Chrissie awaits a reply. "How ... how did he die?" persistently asked Dani, "He was murdered by a blonde bombshell" sarcastically returned Chrissie. Dani sits down on the stairs. She peers up at Chrissie and sees the guilt in her eyes. Chrissie stands there, anxious to hear what Dani is going to say next. "Look I know this must be hard -" said Chrissie "I'm a police-woman. And I know when someone's hiding something. You wanna tell me the truth?"
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